IELTS Writing Task 2: Education sample answer — Band 8
A model answer written by us and modeled on the IELTS Writing Task 2 format. The band label reflects this practice example — it's not an official score.
The question
Band 8 model answer
~244 wordsOpinion is divided over the central purpose of a university: some argue it should cultivate academic knowledge for its own sake, while others insist it should equip graduates with practical, job-ready skills. In my view, these aims are not mutually exclusive, and the best universities pursue both.
Those who favour academic skills point to the long-term value of deep, disciplined thinking. A university that teaches students to analyse evidence, construct arguments and question assumptions produces graduates who can adapt to problems that did not even exist when they studied. From this perspective, narrowing education to whatever the current job market wants is short-sighted, because specific technical skills date quickly while the capacity to learn does not.
Those who emphasise employability, on the other hand, make a fair social and economic case. Most students enrol partly to improve their career prospects, and graduating with significant debt but few marketable skills helps no one. Universities that ignore the labour market risk producing knowledgeable graduates who struggle to find work, which undermines the very investment students have made.
In my opinion, the two goals reinforce each other rather than compete. Strong analytical foundations make practical skills more transferable, while placements and applied projects give academic learning a concrete purpose. A university that combines rigorous thinking with real-world relevance serves both the student and society best.
Why this is a band 8
Task response
Both views are discussed in balanced detail and a clear personal opinion is presented and justified throughout.
Coherence and cohesion
Each paragraph develops one view; transitions ("on the other hand", "In my opinion") guide the reader smoothly.
Lexical resource
Flexible, precise vocabulary ("mutually exclusive", "marketable skills", "transferable") with strong topic-specific collocation.
Grammatical range and accuracy
A broad range of complex structures controlled accurately, with very few errors.